That was really good 5/5 i like it, you are now on my favorites.

I really liked your poem...I rated it a 5...You deserve it...And I wish I could have holded on to the one I love but he slipped away...My world did fall apart when he left..But ill get my world back cuz i will get him back..lol..bye and good job!!

I loved your poem and gave u a 5, my love slipped away cause he could'nt handle it. i wish the best 4 u

Wow. I really like this poem. I really loved the first four-five lines. ^_^ Awesome. 5/5

~Anthony

This is a good poem, straight from the heart. The only thing i would point out is that i think u meant to say thought instead of taught? but its really good. Well Done

Nice job, the message was clear, you could brush up the flow a bit more.

This is beautiful & touching
5/5
love
amy

Hey nena
i hope everythings good with u and marco cause it sounds like u REALLY love him. but yea, nice poem 5/5

OMG this is such a great poem!!!! I luved it!!! And I've read some of ur other poems and they are fantastic too!!! I'm gonna add u to my favs!!!
5/5.

Awesome poem and i can totally realte to every part
nice flow and awesome use of words
take care

I can totally relate to this poem. It is so greatly written and the only thing i'll say is that is it suppose to be taught or thought??? I just wondered if i'd read it right. Keep writing because you are a good writer :)

That is SO good! anyway i posted on ur forum thingy...but WOW! that happened 2 me recently...but im gettin over it...so yea 5/5 4 sure!!!
~*Who Cares?*~

GREAT poem... Had truth & meaning behind it. Keep it up... I hope to read more.
-Kate
P.S. Check out my poem, "Because I'm Crazy"... I think you'll like it.

Awww thats so cute!! lol i love it! 5/5 deffinately great job keep it up
Becky
xoxo

Wow, really beatiful
uve got some skill girl
keep writting
xoxox

Hey, this is really good, honestly i am not one for love poems although i was cheated on once yea it sucks, luckily i didn't care about the guy much at the time...you should sit down and tell marco how you feel, it may hurt to say those things to him, but it may help him to understand...

I love your poems i love your style for some reason you seem to make a lot of realllly small spelling mistakes which are kind of annoying sometimes i think you only one in this poem and it was

But never had i once taught
that you'd leave me on the spot

should it have been thought?

anyways 5/5