Hold me

by deadnalone   Oct 24, 2005


Written a little while ago.

Hold me in your arms,
Until I fall to sleep,
Cause when i lie without you baby,
I can't help but weep,

Look into my eyes,
Show me your true love,
Your true love for me,
Angel from above,

When I'm in your arms,
It's like heaven here on earth,
So hold me extra tight,
And make me feel no mirth,

Hold me close to you,
Wrap me in your heart,
Want to be in you arms forever,
Never want us to part,

Hold me soft and gentle,
Kisses light on my skin,
Be careful not to break,
My fragile heart within,

Hold me oh so closely,
And hold me oh so tight,
Hold me till i start to drift,
To fall asleep at night...

*All comments and votes are greatly appreciated as always.*

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  • 18 years ago

    by confusion

    Its amazing yet again. very sweet and almost peaceful. love it, love em all.

    -x-x-x-x--x-x-

  • 18 years ago

    by Toni

    Wow..beautiful...

    Hold me in your arms,
    Until I fall to sleep,
    Cause when i lie without you baby,
    I can't help but weep,

    This first verse really set the scene and was so perfect in its own right. I love the imagery, its flawless...this poem really struck a chord with me.

    I want to take your pain away so much, if only i could give u a real hug instead of these crappy cyber ones!! *hugs*

    Thinking of you xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Hidden Meaning

    Good poem, it was really cute, 5/5, take care,

    *~Jen~*

  • 18 years ago

    by Lemma

    Aww hun, mega sweet and a great write as always. 5/5 - I'm off to read the other one now.
    Emmi xx

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