This single tear from my heart

by deadnalone   Oct 24, 2005


This one doesn't rhyme but i really like it.

This tear from my heart,
This single tear from my soul,
Is spilled from my love for you,
As i fade and loose control...

I've lost control of my tears, my emotions and my love,
If i could direct it somewhere else i would, but i can't.

My tears spill from these brown eyes,
Frozen in the absence of your love and the beating of my heart.

My emotions run wild and free in all directions,
I just wish i could lock them away in a cage far from your soft blue eyes.

My love, for you and no one else,
No matter how hard i try, how hard i try to pretend, to act like i do not hold love for you any greater than the next boy, i can't.

Lord knows I've tried to hold someone else, to kiss someone else, to love someone else but nobody feels the same.

Nobody knows the way we used to kiss, so gentle and soft,
Our lips lingering, holding one another's as if that moment could last forever.

Our love could not last forever though, i tried. I held you for as long as i could, i loved you in a way i had never loved anybody before, there was nobody like you, there never will be and i know that and that is why i feel so lost and alone inside.

I knew you took something of me when you left but i never knew that you had taken the very beating of my heart, the warmth of my breath and the joy in my smile.

As i fade and loose control,
Spilled from my love for you,
This single tear from my soul...

*All comments and votes greatly appreciated as always.*

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  • 11 years ago

    by claire

    This is really beautiful - like an exerp from an amazing book, only more fluid.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lemma

    Wow lelliekins i dunno wat to say. It's beautiful. Totally lost for words really i dunno what to say. If I cud give it a 6 i'd give it a 7. Really beautiful hunni.

    Emmi xx

  • 13 years ago

    by confusion

    I love it. just love it. so different. so amazing!!!

    I knew you took something of me when you left but i never knew that you had taken the very beating of my heart

    its stunning

    bundles of hugs :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Toni

    Woah captivating. I actually really like how this poem doesn't rhyme, cos it makes it more fluid and emotional, and its also different to read, i like how you experiment with different styles.

    *hugs*love youp hun