That was a great poem mister. Very easy to relate for any age group. Cant wait to read the rest of your work!!!!

Wow, your poems are great. ive read most of them. i only have like 5 to go. they are really, really great! the way you write them is amazing! when i read them it looks as though you put a lot of time and effort in to them, and alot of feeling in to them. great poems by the way. 5/5
~Serenia~