My Dream

by Shy   Oct 25, 2005


Fearfully watching
while my mind is spinning
wondering what i did wrong
to see him standing there
yelling in pain
no mortal wound can cause
he yells "you bi+(h"
i stare blankly
waiting to be hit
"I'm not taking you shit"
is what he says
as he turns and walks away
when he got to the door
i just dropped to the floor
i held my ears tight
and screamed with all my might
as i turn and look out the window
all i hear is a bang
his body falls limply
right to the ground
gun still in mouth
a woman standing around
looks at me calmly
handed me a folded paper
as i open it tears were streaming down
for it said "though i shot myself
you were the one holding the gun
i picked the weapon up
put it into my mouth
and i awoke with a shout

* this was a dream i had
it really frightens me cause the guy is one of my friend if you have any idea what this could mean please tell me*

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  • 12 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great peice (couple of typos you may like to address thoug)

    as for the dream... death usually symbolises change not a literal death. also it could just be showing a fear you have or some underlying anxioty.

  • 13 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    This was very deep. I've had dreams before that I tried to write about. They never came out as great as this poem here. Keep up the great work and take care. =]

  • 13 years ago

    by gorgeouslilmissy

    Wow.. scary..hope everything turns out ok! x

  • 13 years ago

    by Jamie

    This is soooooooo good!!! i dont know where i heard this but i heard like when something or someone dies in a dream it's a symbol of maturing or losing something to gain...i dont think it's a bad thing but it did make for a cool a.s.s poem

  • 13 years ago

    by daisy

    It means you want matt bad but you want me too...lol i like this one.

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