Comments : Rivers Of The Heart

  • 18 years ago

    by HJ

    Hi guys,

    This poem has taken me a little while to write as it is very personal to me. I'm sure how it will be interperted...
    I hope you enjoy it and respect my abigious style.

    Kisses
    Hayley

  • 18 years ago

    by HJ

    Sorry meant to say "Im NOT sure how it will be interpreted"

    Kisses

  • 18 years ago

    by Harry Bryant

    Hi again Hayley, thought i would send a small comment ypour way, another good poem, takes the reader into your mind and then into your heart, sounds just like a summer love to me, one that is remembered with tenderness, and wonderment as to how it could ever end, but the passion while it lingered on was so great, makes a person think it was something needed to get you to a higher plane of love replacing the passion that was there and developing it into a full blown love, only to have it too somehow come to an end, could it have been just an encroachment on your own loneliness or could it have been someone that was attached to another but for some reason was detached for the summer months, alas I fear we shall never know the answer to that, all in all a darn good poem. as always your friend Harry

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I love the way the poem mingles a story with passions.Then leads to natural metaphors and imagery with a flow that I envy. You did it again. You have not lost your touch 5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0hh t0uching lines. very well written. g0od use 0f w0rds. beautifully written keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by HJ

    A small comment Harry!! ha!ha! Thank you so much for you kind words and encouragment. I love the way you have read and digested everyword. Not knowing the answer you say, perphaps in my next poem he!he!

    Thanks to everyone for taking the time, means a lot to me. And Michael thank you for your kind words, you envy my flow...I am very flattered as you are one of my favourite writers, so thank you.

    Kisses to you all
    Hayley xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jay27

    I think possibly this is your most interesting poem yet, you know I prefer these to your dark ones.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    HJ...Another sensational write....as always....Love your work....

    Love Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by PJ

    In one word?

    BREATHTAKING

  • 18 years ago

    by Lily

    It was beaustiful and it means so much it seems..i'm sorry if that happened to you. I loved this you are a very good poet keep up the good work.

    Lily

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    This was so beautiful i really liked it!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I enjoyed reading that.

  • 18 years ago

    by HJ

    Thank you so much Adel that is so sweet of you. I am currently working on a new piece. But anyone whom knows me will tell you that I always do take a while. Always have been like that, dont know why.

    I promise within the next couple of days I will be entering my latest poem.

    Kisses
    Hayley

  • 18 years ago

    by Shelby Bridges

    I would rather have one poem that
    takes a while then ten I can write in
    a day...I believe this poem was worth
    the wait...

    Shelby

  • 18 years ago

    by Kurt

    Great poem. Amazingly familiar feeling behind the poem. Always willing to lend and ear and a shoulder =-D. Anyway great poem and a job well done.