YoU'Ve AlWaYs CaReD

by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ   Oct 27, 2005


Looking back at out memories
my heart shatters down
I try to always have a smile on my face
never a smile

even though it hurts inside
and we've gone our separate ways
i always seem to remember how you
looked on those warm summer nights

your eyes so warm
and your lips so soft
i just can't help but
to get lost

I'll always love you
but you never loved me
it was so obvious
but i was too blind to see

Please never forget me
or the love that we shared
I'm just trying to convince myself
that you've always cared

*this is for....well i don't know who this one is for...i just put pen to paper and this is what came out tell me what u think....comment and vote and I'll return the favor*

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  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    I like this one a lot.
    I can relate to most of it.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    You know my poem "My Ex", The girl that has me thinking is you!!!!

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Thanks for answering... I am happy ya workin things out. And I have a daughter she is 2 and a half years old. I had her after we broke up. After I moved to Florida. He came down for a few weeks to visit and boom. Pregnant. H eleft and I found out I was pregnant and shit. Shit happens. Its been rough cus it wasnt the first time I was pregnant. I had 3 miscarriages b4 I had my Jaylo. Her name is Jayleen Angelie aka JLo...SHe is way prettier than JLo. lol. So he thought I was going to lose Jayleen too and didnt get all excited till I was like 5 months pregnant. I dont blame him. But by then he had a girl and shit. We just seperated, distance and stuff. I am going to see him this Saturday in Pennsilvanya. Thats were he is at, federal prison. But wateva we will c what happens. Luck with Marco. KISS KISS

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Okay so this is good and it was weird because the first two stanzas didnt rhyme but if you switched one word they would and they would still make sense lol they'd actually make more sense

    Looking back at out memories
    my heart shatters down
    I try to always have a smile on my face
    never a smile ***frown??***

    even though it hurts inside
    and we've gone our separate ways
    i always seem to remember how you
    looked on those warm summer nights **days?**

    i dunno i think it sounds better that way but other then that amazing job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by 1/2 brEed_hispAnic_cAt

    I know wat u mean ma. keep on writin.
    1 LUV !

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