I like it is nice it reminds me of sum one i closely know.... NICE!!!!! =)

And ANOTHER awesome peom haha im running out of peoms of yours to read! lol you know what that means? WRITE MORE! lol i wanna read more! haha 5/5 great job
Becky
xoxo

I know wat u mean ma. keep on writin.
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Okay so this is good and it was weird because the first two stanzas didnt rhyme but if you switched one word they would and they would still make sense lol they'd actually make more sense

Looking back at out memories
my heart shatters down
I try to always have a smile on my face
never a smile ***frown??***

even though it hurts inside
and we've gone our separate ways
i always seem to remember how you
looked on those warm summer nights **days?**

i dunno i think it sounds better that way but other then that amazing job 5/5

Thanks for answering... I am happy ya workin things out. And I have a daughter she is 2 and a half years old. I had her after we broke up. After I moved to Florida. He came down for a few weeks to visit and boom. Pregnant. H eleft and I found out I was pregnant and shit. Shit happens. Its been rough cus it wasnt the first time I was pregnant. I had 3 miscarriages b4 I had my Jaylo. Her name is Jayleen Angelie aka JLo...SHe is way prettier than JLo. lol. So he thought I was going to lose Jayleen too and didnt get all excited till I was like 5 months pregnant. I dont blame him. But by then he had a girl and shit. We just seperated, distance and stuff. I am going to see him this Saturday in Pennsilvanya. Thats were he is at, federal prison. But wateva we will c what happens. Luck with Marco. KISS KISS

::MELI::

You know my poem "My Ex", The girl that has me thinking is you!!!!

::MELI::

I like this one a lot.
I can relate to most of it.
5/5