Eternal curse

by Bradley Peter   Oct 29, 2005


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does the mere mortal not know thy name
upon his family thy curse him shame
the family name, die not, as such
but cause eternal pain to whom it touch
does the mere mortal not know thy name
upon his family thy curse him shame
Eternally walking across this earth
each child die, within it's birth

thy strike the mere mortal with not thunder
but grant him eternal life of blunder
knowing forever, why cursed, his fate
resounds in the thought, his sorrys too late
thy strike the mere mortal with not thunder
but grant him eternal life of blunder
food to ashes inside his being
his curse not blindness, but eternal seeing

many decades pass, his lungs still breath
knowing, this world, he shan't ever leave
but lovers did, quite often so
his is a tale of eternal woe
many decades pass, his lungs still breath
knowing, this world, he shan't ever leave
the last man on earth, he aged to be
he lived forever, but was never free

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  • 17 years ago

    by Crimson Princess

    This is a good poem and i like the way you write. the words you use are of a wide vocabulary and i think that it is great that you can put them together so great. keep the good work up and i hope to see more from you...

  • 17 years ago

    by Crimson Princess

    This is a good poem and i like the way you write. the words you use are of a wide vocabulary and i think that it is great that you can put them together so great. keep the good work up and i hope to see more from you...

  • 17 years ago

    by Crimson Princess

    This is a good poem and i like the way you write. the words you use are of a wide vocabulary and i think that it is great that you can put them together so great. keep the good work up and i hope to see more from you...

  • 18 years ago

    by Sirkka / Selene

    Some things aren't really clear( I'm sorry, I don't know something else to say) But I liked it verry much.
    Thanks for reading my poem.
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by Ben

    Hey, i liked this poem, it was good, some parts were a little unclear, but that might have just been me. thank you for commenting on my poem, i am glad you liked it. im not the best at analysing (sp)? things, so sorry if that was what u wanted. but it is well writtten and a great use of the language.
    great work
    Ben

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