Wow this is really good i love the language in it.

he lived forever, but was never free

love that line xox

This is relaly good. seriously im very impressed

Hey, i liked this poem, it was good, some parts were a little unclear, but that might have just been me. thank you for commenting on my poem, i am glad you liked it. im not the best at analysing (sp)? things, so sorry if that was what u wanted. but it is well writtten and a great use of the language.
great work
Ben

Hey, i liked this poem, it was good, some parts were a little unclear, but that might have just been me. thank you for commenting on my poem, i am glad you liked it. im not the best at analysing (sp)? things, so sorry if that was what u wanted. but it is well writtten and a great use of the language.
great work
Ben

Some things aren't really clear( I'm sorry, I don't know something else to say) But I liked it verry much.
Thanks for reading my poem.
x

This is a good poem and i like the way you write. the words you use are of a wide vocabulary and i think that it is great that you can put them together so great. keep the good work up and i hope to see more from you...

This is a good poem and i like the way you write. the words you use are of a wide vocabulary and i think that it is great that you can put them together so great. keep the good work up and i hope to see more from you...

This is a good poem and i like the way you write. the words you use are of a wide vocabulary and i think that it is great that you can put them together so great. keep the good work up and i hope to see more from you...