Comments : My Pain

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Nice work. I love the first stanza, but I aslo like the way you've said:
    "I find the strength,
    to live today," very inspiring, thank you.
    5/5
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by Naerwen

    I to just live in waiting for death to release me of my pain. an amazing read, another favourite of mine. well done

    Naerwen The Chosen Bride of White Rabbit

  • 17 years ago

    by Nyx

    Now that is a poem!good job

  • 17 years ago

    by xLaurax

    That's really beautiful! It kinda reminds me of a few of my friends. Great job!

    -Aera-

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I really liked this poem. I can relate to what you are saying. I love the imagery and the style is very effective for the topic. Keep it up. Nik