You'll See

by Fallengod667   Oct 31, 2005


Look in my past,
and you will see,
all the things,
thats wrong with me.

You'll see my faults,
You'll see my grief,
You'll see the times,
that Ive been beat.

You'll see my thoughts,
Of death and pain,
You'll see the reason,
i went insane.

You'll see the cause,
of why I'm cold,
you'll see the fall,
of body and soul.

You'll see the reason,
why I'm here,
you'll see the things,
that i hold dear.

You'll see the people,
that i call friends,
you'll see the way,
that i will end.

You'll see the things,
i try to hide,
you'll see the dark part,
of my mind.

You'll see the things,
i hate to see,
you'll see the things,
thats wrong with me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    A dark poem indeed, but I can also see elements of hope, you mention friends and things you hold dear, never forget about them. I also love the way you address the reader directly, so they become very involved in the poem.
    Another great write, 5/5
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by jennifer

    This poem was really amazing I loved reading every single line 5/5
    Jennifer