That is AMAZING! i hope this poem somehow relates to your personal life's endeavour and ipinions because it's a really great way to live. congratulations.
-Suzie

Woah this poem was powerful adn passoinate
I thought that all the differing linesstanzas showed different thoughts...I really felt like I was inside your mind and your feelings were rushing forward
"Freedom has its price, as does it its consequence. "
That was a brilliant line, you are a most talented writer so keep writing :)

Stunning work, a great message to project. Keep it up, will definitely check back for more. You're on my faves list :)

I dont really get the "sparks flew" bit, or how exactly this turned religious.. in my opinions, its not one of your best