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  • 12 years ago

    by the middle

    I like the language you used, but in general it could maybe use a little more structure... but like you said, it's a new style for you, so considering... great work!!
    take care, xoxoxo

    (ps... if u get a chance, could you take a look at my poems? thanks :) )

  • 12 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Wonderful!!! the style can be a bit cluttered, but that works well with the words you have used. its great! good work!! *votes 5*

    Ruby

  • 12 years ago

    by Toni

    Beautiful. Captivating. Fluent. Effective. Brilliantly worded. Unique. Enchanting. Flawless imagery. Perfect.

    Excellent!

    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx love youp

  • 11 years ago

    by Amanda

    Long but very beautiful