You Promised Me Forever

by TinyDancer46   Nov 1, 2005


Laying in your arms all night
Smiling as you held me tight
Knowing we would stay together
As you promised me forever

Grinning deep down in my heart
Praying that we'd never part
Knowing we'd stay more than friends
Cause I knew forever never ends

A wake up hug, a kiss goodbye
"I'll see you later" you then lie
But I assumed that you were true
Because forever wasn't through

A call that broke my heart in two
Knowing I was dumped by you
I thought that this would happen never
I mean you promised me forever...

The truth comes out when I see you
Holding on to someone new
Someone who was once my friend...
I guess forever really ends

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  • 17 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Awwww thats nice 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

    Hey hun
    this is really awesome
    I love your poems...very much!
    I love the first and the last stanza!
    very great job hun
    Keep it up
    Yours
    NemO xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Maria

    Again i read ur poems and wish i was as talented as u u r brilliant! luv maria xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by MissSideways

    Ohhhhh this depresses me because my boyfriend just moved to rockhampton but he promised me forever too... ur so awesome honey. i admire u.
    dani xx

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Simply WOW.......
    amazing poem. so heartfelt.
    good job dear.5/5

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