0h t0uching p0em, very heartfelt. l0t 0f em0ti0n in this. h0pe y0u`re 0hk. g0od j0b!
l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra

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That was so beautiful and so true
i really liked keep up the good work
i still feel the same i wrote my poem
called forever is not promised so when you get a chance take a look at my poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks
Love
JAYma
aka
100%lovehurts!!

Wonderful poem, i love reading a poem like urs that i can realate to so well done and thankyou
keep up the brill work
take care xx

Flawless flow revealing the pain of a broken heart it is a 5

Oh I feel sorry for u
this poem is so good and is a 5
keep up

Wow....that closing line was amazing!! Sometimes "forevers" aren't all they're built up to be...Just remember that people come into our lives for a reason...even if that reason is only to learn from them...never forget to find the lesson in every situation...and keep your head up! Excellent job!

I Enjoy reading your work ,I love your rhyme shceme.

The love might but the guilt never ends. 5/5/ again.

Great poem! i feel the exact same way...

So sad!!!!!!!! well written though.keep it up!!!

This was a good poem. I liked it!

-Taylor

Hey just remember that it never ends...i loved the poems keep it up

Nice work, i understand, hmm not sure what to say hehe but good job xox rc

This is a really good poem me and ma boyfriend broke up and it was becuz he wanted my goddaughters mother it hurt so bad.....really nice

Thx 4 the comment ,,, ii love this its cute but sad ... ii kno how you feel ... guys never stay real

I know how you fell in this poem, your are absolutely terrifc writer! keep it up!!!

This is a really good poem

Omg...wat do i say nw...awsum?superb?..keep it up !!

Simply WOW.......
amazing poem. so heartfelt.
good job dear.5/5