Miss My Dear

by AhmadAfaneh   Nov 1, 2005


Rain drops fall in rhythm
while i am alone in my room sitting
writing a new poem
about the life that i am living
that life which was torn down
since u said that you are going
leaving me to drown
in tears i am shedding
on how it used to be
now it's all became hidden
now it's all just a memory.

I close the book but i am still seeing
your face in every outline
i try to sleep but i am missing you, your touching

I miss you by my side.
So i close my eyes wishing
that the whole world will collide
then to get shattered in a sudden.

Please come back my dear
I'll give u all my loving
your long absence that i cant bear
come to protect my heart from charring
come and save my soul tonight.

Cant you hear me screaming
your name out in the space
actually no one is hearing
so i turn my back to the place
and i keep dreaming
of the day when we'll be together
again... and i am here waiting...

The_Lonesome_89@hotmail.com
Ahmed_Afanah@yahoo.co.uk

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  • 16 years ago

    by amandalynn

    This is realli good..i like it..5/5
    manda

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Good use of words. I liked it.

    have a great day,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    Hey hunn
    this is such a beautiful but sad poem..
    u did an awesome job.. i loved it.. 5/5
    k keep writting.

  • Wow... that was awesome. the last stanza really touched me. i dont know why, myb cos im missing my love too...
    ne ways, good poem. i liked the rythm especially.