Comments : To Murder Your Love

  • 18 years ago

    by the middle

    Wow.
    i think this is your best from what i've read.
    beautifully written and makes you think. amazing.
    take care, xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Cherri

    Wow, you're very talented, I told you I would comment after I read, *hehehehehehehehehehe* So, come read some of mine sometime, PEACE!

    -*-Cherri-*-

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Omg that was really good...also a lot of emmotion...fabulous! 5/5!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    Reading it, it was so beautiful. but if i look back i didnt quite understand the relationship. it had a nice flow but i couldnt understnad it. but its ur poem so ur the only one that needs to understand. great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Syn

    I really like your poems. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    SCARY! Great poem but that would frighten me!!! Good piece though hun :)

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Okkkkk, I really like the poem but, oddly enough, it's your explaination of it that is disturbing to me. But that has nothing to do with you, it has to do with the guy! Regardless, great poem.

    Tiffany.xox.

  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    That is confusing.
    Maybe he doesn't want it to be so hard on you when he wants the relationship to end.
    If that makes sense.
    Anyways,
    I loved the poem.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Great job. A lot of feeling in this, and good imagery also.

  • 18 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    I Luved This Poem! Iz The Best! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    This is an interesting poem, I'm glad for your explanation at the end, and i agree with the idea that you can't kill someone you care about. You put this idea into words really nicely. The only suggestion is to fix the spelling mistake - waht to what. Keep it up :)

  • 17 years ago

    by eric

    Hey thats an amazing poem :P 5/5 :D!