Murder me my love

by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child   Nov 3, 2005


Kill me softly
murder me sweetly
create my passing
so discreatly

take the rope
take the knife
take my soul
take my life

take the rope
pull it tight
toss me to
eternal night

take the blade
slice it deep
i pray not the lord
my soul to keep

take my life
as i hold you close
let me take
that fatal dose

no, wait
i cant let go
please
there's too much you don't know

never mind
the pain you cause is way to strong
ive tried to make it work
but you make it all wrong

so...

kill me softly
murder me sweetly
create my passing
so discretely

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  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]

    I really loved this poem hun! u r so talented! ur full of emotion! i hope u r ok! please be strong and hang in ther! hopefully things will work themselves out! if u need someone i am here! plz check out my poems!

    Luv maddison

  • 18 years ago

    by AhmadAfaneh

    Heeey.. WoW!!!! that was sooo sweeet it rele evoked somethin in myself .. nice one and gud job .. :) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aw hun this is amazing, I loved the way it flowed with the small verses & stuff you have some tremendeous talent here, I think you've used a lot of wonderful techniques in this poem its amaziing, keep on writing hun your poetry is amazing, lubb you

  • 18 years ago

    by Robiie

    Wow its so good
    its written so beautifuly and there is so much pain in your words
    take care x0x0

  • 18 years ago

    by hm

    OMG I F U K I N LOVE DAT POEM!so much emotion and so deep! i hope ur okay!keep it up!and always keep shining! p.s thanks so much 4 the comment means heaps! ...josie....

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