Wow.deep.i feel ur pain.great love it.

Excellent piece of writing!

well done

OMG I F U K I N LOVE DAT POEM!so much emotion and so deep! i hope ur okay!keep it up!and always keep shining! p.s thanks so much 4 the comment means heaps! ...josie....

Wow its so good
its written so beautifuly and there is so much pain in your words
take care x0x0

Aw hun this is amazing, I loved the way it flowed with the small verses & stuff you have some tremendeous talent here, I think you've used a lot of wonderful techniques in this poem its amaziing, keep on writing hun your poetry is amazing, lubb you

Heeey.. WoW!!!! that was sooo sweeet it rele evoked somethin in myself .. nice one and gud job .. :) 5/5

I really loved this poem hun! u r so talented! ur full of emotion! i hope u r ok! please be strong and hang in ther! hopefully things will work themselves out! if u need someone i am here! plz check out my poems!

Luv maddison