Mocking Tears for Desperate Fears

by RadianceInReverse   Nov 5, 2005


I read a poem that took me back
to a guy I once loved
now my heart is beating so fast
How do I stop this pain?

This fear of rejection
keeps rolling down my cheek
for years to come I continually weep
because he tore my heart out
using it for a rug to wipe your feet

He laughed at my tears
and poked fun at my fears
but I continued to love him for all those years
I wish I could vanquish
these painful memories, that make me cry

I release a painful sigh
asking myself why
why did I remain so loyal?
why didn't I leave?
why did I take the pain?

Cause I thought you loved me
I thought you cared
But I was wrong

And now I'm left with
These Mocking Tears of my Desperate Fears

I desperately need your help writing the last stanza of this poem..Please help me..And also comment on this poem thank you..Joclyn

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    What about -Mocking Tears or Desperate fears for the title- as for the stanza its something u need tow rit on your own to make it worth while:)

    Jenn
    what number am i on.. 2?

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I wish I can forget everything about him,
    The way he smile till the way he frown,
    But until then, I won't stop loving him,
    Cause he is my one and only true love.

    Lol...this is what I come out with...for the last stanza...don't think it's any good...and you might not be able to relate to it to...just thought I give it a shot...anyway...this poem is good...

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]

    Hello huni, i totally love this poem, i think u r a really great writter, i can really relate to how you are feeling, life is hard and just wen u think it can't get worse it does! but u have to hang in ther ok hun? coz everyone goes thru pain in ther lives but u have to hold on, life is what u make out of it and i u look on the bright side of things then it will come a lot better, plz listen to me and i hope that my advice helps, just try to be happy and live each moment as if it were your last coz u never no what is going to happen.... i would be really happy if u could open up 2 me and tell what your life is about and why you feel so hurt, i hope that u find happiness and im always here if u need someone to talk to

    keep shining coz u r very talented

    luv Maddy xxx

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