I really like this poem. besides teh 7 months, it relates exactly to what i just went through with someone who meant the world to me.

First off, i love the title which ive always thought was important in like, gettin initial reader-ness, also, i like the simple rhyming scheme and the message over all. great poem! keep up the good work

I understand the feelings in lots of this poem and co-incidentally the boy I love is called Marc so I almost cried (Lol im such a cry baby now adays)...anywayz, so far it’s my fave poem by you and I look forwards to reading more when I get the chance. X

Hey i really like this poem in a way I can relate to it. Keep up tha writing chica. Much love & God bless

Wow great poem its deep n exctcly how i feel bout my 1st love. Thanx 4 the comment. N keep up the good work!
-HUGS N KISSES!

You know girl I am confused....I love your poems too u know, but you always dedicated them to Marco and whats that guys name, I cant remember now...but Do you love Marco or the other guy. What exactly happened between ya. And my poems are my stories. If you read carefully and put them together, You'll come to see I have a messed up life. Perfect for poetry...lol. If you only knew girl! But I like this poem and thanks for putting me on your fav.

Omgsh i LOVE all of your poems they r SO good.... 5/5 good job

Awe this is really sad, but great.. I like how you are talking to this guy in the poem, its very well done! I can sorta relate, and Im sure everyones been tru something like this! Well done on catching the atmosphere! x)

Omg girl i seriously see what you mean..........i think our love lives are very similar (god i cant spell lol) this poem was REALLY GOOD and it felt like someone was twisting my insides around....reminded me so much of 'the guy' lol. I love your work and girl your defnitely on my favs!!
*thumbs up*
luv ya jess xoxoxox

Aww this si soo cute the only advise i can give ya is to capitalize the 1st letter in each line and use punctuation!!! besides that it's great!! ;)
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
~~Sweetie

I really understand you i wrote a poem called forever is not promised please check that out you might like it!!!!!

0h that was really g0od. t0uching lines. beautifully written! keep it up
thank u f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk. meant al0t t0 me! =)

Omg thats all i can say is unbelieveable you should be getting awards for all your amazing poems

Love it sad but good

Awww.that is so sweet! and sad. kepp strong...luv.
xxx

Wow this one is really good, im sorry it didnt last forver i know how that feels

lots of lvoe
*~*Becky*~*

Hey! I loved this poem! I can really relate to it:(! Its awesome! It's a 5/5 for sure! Keep writing . . .
*Lisa*