Waiting

by Ali   Nov 11, 2005


I'm waiting,
waiting for you,
waiting to feel your touch,
the warmth of your embrace,
the sun goes down,
its light evaporating,
and i stand by my window,
in my castle by the sea,
waiting to see your ship come sailing in,
waiting for the light to cast shadows across your face,
waiting for the curtains to dance in the wind,
while it swirls around us,
bringing the world to its knees,
the sky falling,
the stars from the sky tangling in my hair,
the moons light shining silver,
as we dance,
holding on forever,
I'm waiting,
for that dance,
I'm waiting,
for you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    Wow! so beautiful! i can imagine myself being wrapped in curtains! thanks for commenting on one of my poems! ;D 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by leanne

    Nicepoem, thanks for commenting on mine... yours is goodkeep going... thanks again cud u check out... if you knew! thank hun xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    Hey alinator!
    awww great job it almost give the reader a shivery feeling, great descriptions!!!
    xoxo!~rach

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Very well written, i liked the repetition and the way you set it out.
    The wording is beautiful, definately 5/5

    Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Wow. This is truly a work of art! and it kinda sounds familier. I must have read it before when the server logged me out. anyway, I can't find anything to criticize, so 5/5!

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