Comments : The Best Dream (part 2)

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Good. Nice job on the words and writing this. This is a story that not only confusing but its also good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    It's a good poem although the way you end each one gets akward.It's good but still....we'll see how part three is....