Ok ive made my decision..this is the best of your poems, well so i think anyway. That was truely amazing and sweet. I loved the lines
"It weighed me down
It made me break
So now im off
To heavens Gate"

amazing!!

Love Chantelle

Wow that was great....very good rhythem and great poem. keep up the good work and thanks alot for the comment....5/5

Omgsh! That was wonderful!!! I loved your word choice! GREAT JOB! 5/5 Definitely! Keep up the great work!

This is such a great poem. It reminds me a lot of some of the things I have written, and how I have felt. Hope you don't have to say goodbye like this, someone with your talent doesn't deserve an end like that.
Great Write, keep it up.
*VioletRaven*

Wow i liked this one.. you're a skilled writer loving your work...
Leilani

"This is not,
the last we'll see,
next time we meet,
I will be free."
that stanza was amazing and sounded really free-spirited...THE POEM WAS sad AND really WELL written..DEFINETLY worth my 5/5