Come fly with me

by xX-jess-Xx   Nov 11, 2005


Please don't cry,
my beloved friend.
I'll be with you always,
until the very end.

Though I'm not here,
I'm always there.
Don't think I'll forget,
I'll always care.

You were there for me,
when others weren't.
And I thank you so much,
for all the things i learnt.

See, you pulled me through,
kept my head high.
And now I've moved on,
please, theres no need to cry.

I'm so far from home,
so far away from you.
Miles away from what i love,
yeah, I'm missing will too!

But you were who I cared about,
who I'd still do anything for,
and as each day goes by,
I miss you more and more.

So Ellie, this is a tribute,
to how you helped me find my wings.
I hope one day you'll fly with me,
we'll soar over saturns rings.

**please comment!**
(and Ellie, i love you so much! words cant express how thankful i am, but i hope this is nearly there)

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  • 18 years ago

    by dancer

    Great poem i bet it must make ur friend feel so special to know she has a friend like u
    xo
    allana

  • 18 years ago

    by *Amber Faith.* ©

    This is a terrific poem.
    5/5 =]
    Your very talented!!

  • 18 years ago

    by cristina

    Well first of all thanks for all the comments!!! and u know what, your very talented good job!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I thought this was really touching. I'll give you the suggestions first. The second stanza sounds a little "odd" if you don't mind me saying. "Though I'm not here, I'm always there" seems to contradict itself...maybe reword this?
    Also I don't think there's any need to say "don't cry" twice, maybe you could alter the second one.
    I'm sure Ellie will love this poem, I gave my friends a poem too when I left school so I know it helps to show how you feel. The final stanza was amazing, it gave me shivers. For the improvements, keep that stanza style in mind and you're on to a winner. Well done, take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    "Satin rings"?
    I didn't quite get that. Either you had run out of rhymes or it's something personal.
    Anyway, there's that i's thing again, but the rest is very touching, and it has an air of heart-felt-ness.

    Good Writing!
    beth

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