Hey this is really good, i know exactly how the person you are describing feels 5/5
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Very good poem baby
very sad and true
lovely
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That's really powerful

the title fits it perfectly

this really gives a insight to how the guys mind works

Wow, I really loved the ending the best best part is the bleeding it stops him from needing that was just a master peice I love it! It was a great poem and I loved how you made it a he.. diffrent =)
Well done hun you've got talent =D

Waauw.. This poem is soo good. I really really like this part :
He watches each drop fall
The best part is the bleeding
It slowly drowns his spirit, stops his heart from needing
That's so serious, and truthfull, really. Keep it up..

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