I'm coming for you

by Bradley Peter   Nov 14, 2005


Sitting here safe, a tear runs down the side of my face
i can't help but think, of you in that terrible place
how do you manage, in the dark and all alone
i fear for you each day, and each day my fear has grown
what if i never see you again, if our time was our last
i could never forget you, you wouldn't stay in the past
I'm warm in my heart, but you must be freezing in the cold
if only i was there, you would have me to be able to hold

you're too good for this, i should be there instead
'why you and not me', keeps running through my head
but I'm coming for you, just hold on a little longer
knowing you're who I'm saving, my body becomes stronger
I'm brushing past the monsters, that hurt you in your dreams
I'm climbing rocky mountains, and crossing raging streams
I'll be there very soon, just give me a day or two
i won't let you die, your time is not yet through

i remember your last words, "be happy and take care"
but i can't be happy now, the pain's too much to bare
if i get there too late, and you lay still in the dark
I'll cry in such anger, and a new mission I'd embark
I'd reach into my pocket, and lift my trusty knife
because if your gone, i wish too to lose my life
but that won't come about, I'll save you before the end
so you just sit and wait, because on me you can depend

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  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I remember your last words, "be happy and take care"
    but i can't be happy now, the pain's too much to bare
    if i get there too late, and you lay still in the dark
    I'll cry in such anger, and a new mission I'd embark
    I'd reach into my pocket, and lift my trusty knife
    because if your gone, i wish too to lose my life
    but that won't come about, I'll save you before the end
    so you just sit and wait, because on me you can depend
    This was was favorite part, I really felt the emotion all though this, expecailly at the end it nearly made me tear up, so sad, so deep, and the pain seems so real. I like the way you write, you have real talent, I knew you weren't a novice, The flow was great dead on, the vocab was excellnt, really powerful, I liked this poem better than I did the other one. Keep up the good work, and I will keep reading. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxUNOxXx

    Awwwwwwww.....i love itt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    u have an amazing mind.

  • 18 years ago

    by sillylittlegirl

    Loved it..n thanks for commenting on my poems..means a lot to me...keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by (*andrea*hurtinside*)

    Love it 5/5 awsome so much feeling you have a gift lol

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody

    Very great. love the rhyme and all
    5/5