Comments : I'm coming for you

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Bradley ...
    Wow I got the shivers wondering what dark place this person is in...
    It held my interest till the very end..The title fit so well ...

    The title reminded me of Freddy Kruger.. 1..2 I'm coming for you..LMAO
    Great job Bradley ...

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley

    Wow...dude thats a really good poem, i like the way you dont tell us where she is..thats for our own minds to make up. Brilliant poem, nice rhymeing scheme and all. Top Poem :) feel free to read any more of mine, some are alot like yours.
    Cya
    Brad

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody

    Very great. love the rhyme and all
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by (*andrea*hurtinside*)

    Love it 5/5 awsome so much feeling you have a gift lol

  • 18 years ago

    by sillylittlegirl

    Loved it..n thanks for commenting on my poems..means a lot to me...keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxUNOxXx

    Awwwwwwww.....i love itt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    u have an amazing mind.

  • 15 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I remember your last words, "be happy and take care"
    but i can't be happy now, the pain's too much to bare
    if i get there too late, and you lay still in the dark
    I'll cry in such anger, and a new mission I'd embark
    I'd reach into my pocket, and lift my trusty knife
    because if your gone, i wish too to lose my life
    but that won't come about, I'll save you before the end
    so you just sit and wait, because on me you can depend
    This was was favorite part, I really felt the emotion all though this, expecailly at the end it nearly made me tear up, so sad, so deep, and the pain seems so real. I like the way you write, you have real talent, I knew you weren't a novice, The flow was great dead on, the vocab was excellnt, really powerful, I liked this poem better than I did the other one. Keep up the good work, and I will keep reading. 5/5