Comments : PrOvEnIeNcE uNkNoWn

  • 18 years ago

    by Alixia

    It is wonderful as usual.
    I love your poems.
    You use metaphors.
    Visuals to get your point across.
    I loved it.
    LoVe Alicia

  • 18 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    LOVED IT! every word, every sentence. every phrase. beautiful. i partcularly liked the beginning:
    "It feels like nothing-
    Hurts like everything.
    You turn the room upside down,
    And I fall awake.
    This is the worst pain I have had to take."
    so oxymoronic that it makes perfect sense with the conflicts. wow!

    keep writing, please! your soo talented and i love reading your work! and stay safe, strong, and healthy!

    *AntiSocial16*

  • 18 years ago

    by Marilyn

    Pretty much

  • 18 years ago

    by Marilyn

    Argh! i

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Time passes.