Love the structure its quite odd for you which makes me love it even more, the feeling and experience of reading and understanding your work and especially this piece is just divine. The message and basis of this piece is great because i can relate to it as im sure heaps of people can.

Cant wait for more, sorry for the no critisism, your getting too damn good!

Cheers,
Lenny

This is great. This is my favorite of yours. It hit home with me for a variety of personal reasons.

This stanza:

it's hard to know
whether you're playing with fire
or sifting through ash
when your appendage
of emotion
has already been charred and
scarred
past the point of healing,
and for that matter,
barred from any sense
of feeling
at all.

Brought it all home to me. Perfect.

Wow......again, amazing! you really are a great writer! jesx

I love how your voice is clearly expressed in your poems. brilliant. Its such an original topic- very refreshing.

I liked this, even though I have no idea what the title means! You've got a really original topic and unique ideas in here, makes for interesting reading on a different persepective. Nice write :)

Very good poem, the structure works perfectly , and the content sure makes me think. There is a strange flow to it, despite the lack of rhyme and the structure...

good job man

Sad, and i wonder that too.....