Once again your poems are starting to sound the same to me.They're are sometimes worded different but you still use the same lines.you need to change that.

This poem is really good i can relate to it

Nice job I guess......no really nice job and so sad. :(

I love that poem! thanx for the comment on "ashes". i wrote that one from the bottom of my heart. this poem is definitely something i can relate to and it has some humor in it too. so...yea, really nice job keep it up.