Comments : Lemonade

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    I love the metaphor in this. the whole uephamism of lemodand and everything. the message was good too. the flow was very fast paced in the beginning then it seemed to get serious so it calmed down. i really liked that.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    WOW...I'm in love with this poem. The whole message was simple and quaint but you wrote it so entrancingly...I gave it a 5.....thanks for the comment....I always return the favor =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    That was amazing. iloved every word great write.
    Emma 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sole

    Turning a fmous quote into a poem is a hard thing to do without ruining the quote. But you pulled it off nicely. Great work.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 16 years ago

    by dreamer88

    Entrancing- loved it! goog job x