Haha, nicee. I actually caught on after the first few lines. I'm guessing Maxine is his mom?which makes it weird because the original song is twisted...whoa, complicated stuff. Good job, keep it up.

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Renee

Kool great do u really like dis guy or wat? plz read an comment sum of mine.

Haha that's cute. Great idea for a poem/song thingy.

Tht poem was copied??? fountains of wayne???

LOL THAT WAS really funny!!
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-Rachel

Hey really good poem! i thought that was a cool way to set it up! im gonna have to try singin that version with the real music
Mandy-check mine out, i only got one but its my first one so it means alot Thanks

Its cute and funny, but not really a poem.

sammi

Ha ha ha wow. i rlly needed a laugh and i went to fun,humor and read this...now im laughing so hard. lol. thk u for making me smile :-) I write poems...but not as good as this. Keep writing this one was aweseom (even though u only changed a few words to a song)