My Sadness - part II (losing you ) -

by AhmadAfaneh   Nov 15, 2005


My tears fell down in rhythm
To cover out my life story that was written
I was living in depression
'Cause I've used up all the chances i was given

Then you came in from far away
You took my hands and showed me the way
On the life you opened my eyes
You were the reason for living up my day

I still remember your hair hanging down on your shoulder
I still remember how you brought me the laughter
And how, when it was cold, you made me warmer
And how i wanted to stay with u forever

I also still remember that day
When you faded away
Then i got nothing to say
And i couldn't imagine living without you a day

Hands of death snatched you from between my arms
Then i wished that tomorrow never comes

Now " I miss you like the deserts miss the rain"
If only i can touch you again
If only i can kiss you again
'cause I can no longer take this pain

When love turns to broken heart
You become alone again and you cry 'cause you're hurt
When you think that you fell in love... you fall apart
But now you just keep falling knowing no one will collect your parts

Everyday i make a silent scream
because losing you just tore down my dreams
And at night i am dropping another tear
'Cause missing you is something i cant bear.

Now when i see the places we've been I imagine you there
I miss you and I cant stop loving you .. oh dear
I wish you still here...

" My love .. i know i will never see you again. Losing you in my life and losing seeing you everyday left me with empty spaces and deep holes in my heart .. i really miss you here beside me .. miss your touch.. miss kissing you ... i miss you to show me the way .. to right me when i am wrong. Well, i guess that we're not meant to see each other again, but still i know one thing that i loved you and i will always love you that is all i know"

The_Lonesome_89@hotmail.com
Ahmed_Afanah@yahoo.co.uk

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  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I love this poem its so good, its also touching!

  • 18 years ago

    by hannah

    Hey mr lonesome , i just wrote a new poem , in a new kinda style for me , it called the river, check it out please !! and anyone else !!! thanks a lot ! xxx

    and i have been reading through your poems , there just beautiful, really touch my heart.

    xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by X~ BrOkEn BeYoNd RePaIr ~X

    Waow... fantastic...X

  • 18 years ago

    by X~ BrOkEn BeYoNd RePaIr ~X

    Waow... fantastic...X

  • 18 years ago

    by hannah

    You made a comment on my poem 'love'.. your poem is amazing , i just write how i feel , but your poems touch the heart, i think your great.