I Need

by sarah jenkins   Nov 16, 2005


I need to feel,
I need to be.
I need to want,
I need to see.

I need to bleed,
Out all my pain.
I cant keep feeling,
So insane.

I need to love,
Like I used to do.
I have to forget,
About you.

I need breathe,
In fresh cool air.
I'm letting go,
I do not care.

I need to refresh,
My thoughts inside.
I need to come out,
I cannot hide.

I need you here,
More than you know.
I cannot keep trying,
But I cant let you go.

I know that you feel me,
I know that you see.
But then theres your girlfriend,
And then theres me.

Won't you just trust me,
Let go of her hand.
I'll take you away,
To our own little land.

There we can be happy,
And forever more grow.
We'll both be in love,
And forget our troubles so.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    A sad little setiment for both of the women in this poem. Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by bex

    I like this one

    sort of reminds me of a song by The Used that i was listening to the other day

    the twist at the end is good, the whole i need this & this is how it could be

    top notch!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is a beautiful poem! Great expression! I can completely relate to this.

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Fantastic job, your rhyming pattern was great and your choice of words were amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by yaRis

    I loved ur poems is so cute and is so weird ciz it reminds me of my own lil story... but i love dis part:

    I know that you feel me,
    I know that you see.
    But then theres your girlfriend,
    And then theres me.

    Won't you just trust me,
    Let go of her hand.
    I'll take you away,
    To our own little land.

    That actually feels like sumething i would write... cuz is part of my life and my story.... keep on writing u are really good =)

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