Great poem I like it...ur a wonderful poet hun, you use such great words to write down and they mend so well together, I added you to my favorites I really like your work and think you can go far with ur work
Hey this a great poem Bj i can relate to this poem, altough what u say is true , it is hard for some to do , u cant always express ur feelings expecially if u dont noe how . But all in all it is greta poem keep up the great work
Very powerful message, and it is wonderfully sweet. Great job on this one...I really like it. I think the title is perfect, and everything about it was great. Good rythm and flow...and you kept the rhyme scheme without losing the meaning. Keep it up, as I told you--you have a lot of talent. Take Care.