Comments : Dad killed me and mom

  • 18 years ago

    by Rosie

    Lovely poem!! so much feelings went into this. well done, please comment on mine. Rosie xXx

  • 12 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I bet that this poem must have been really hard for you to write.

    dad took all the blame
    for now he has no family
    I have put him to shame
    but now I'm with mommy

    This stanza made the whole poem to me. I thought it describe the topic of the poem the best.