OMG! that poem is so good! I like it heaps its really emotional! =D Keep it up

Hey Rosie...sorry...but I don't really understand it...r u having any problems...if u r...u can always tell me...well...hope u r ok...

I had the same thing happen to me, I share your pain.
Great work though

Darkest Wishes
Matt

Hey girl, nice poem. I love this poem, it describes a situation, pretty brief situation, but with a lot of impact.

I can relate to it. It's very powerful. Easy writtin, easy to understand. I was a bit confused with the he's en she's, so I read it twice to get it.

Amazing poem. Keep up the good work girl. -xxx-