Once again you amaze me with your talent to capture words. You are truly and simply a very wonderful writer. Many will, and probably do, admire you greatly, I am also one of them.
shattered and Broken
Wow. The language you used to express this chilling tale was absoulutely brillant. I loved the way it flowed, how the rhyming just made it smoother, and your use of vocabulary. This has to be my favorite of yours... just because I'm a Fantasy Gal. Great Job, I thought it was excellent.