Comments : Perfect world, Perfect end

  • 11 years ago

    by ArtemisiaNightshade

    This is such a truely beautiful poem, I have no words. The images were so clear as I read it, and the colours so vivid. Amazing.
    *VioletRaven*
    P.S. I love your quotes as well, just been reading them and they are all 5/5 from me.

  • 11 years ago

    by Grotesque Angel

    Awesome, the name says it all. That was a great piece of work. Your getting better over time.

    Love you
    xoxo
    Matt

  • 11 years ago

    by Ali

    Beautifull! i love the way you write! the poem has a great flow to it and creates a beatifull image. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Rich

    I just want to get lost in your writing and never come bakc. How beautiful!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow. Excellent. This is VERY good. You are very very very very talented. Keep up the good work! Lotsa love -xxx-

  • 11 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    OMG Suz!!!!
    that was the best poem ive EVER read
    I dont even have words to explain it
    I wish i could write poetry like you can
    OMFG
    SUzie omg
    sorry i cant give you better comments but
    MFG
    that was the BEST
    DONT ever stop writing suzie
    EVER EVER EVER!!!!
    Thank you for sharing this poem with me its helped (you dont know it yet)

  • 11 years ago

    by Dreams

    An incredible write. The descriptions were brilliant, I can picture all of it, I can almost see it playing like a film before me. Perfection... those descriptions displayed a perfect world.. but the twist in the end.. it's a sad tale. Perfection has its own flaws isn't it? Good job. =)

  • 11 years ago

    by love2beloved(chels)

    Thats a perfect poem and i absoltely love it, if u continue to make poems that amazing, then ill certainly read and rate them. 8-)

  • 11 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    ..............
    wow.........
    that was AMAZING!!!!!!
    it gave me shivers, the images were so beautiful

    that was so great!!! i love it. that poem is so amazing

    ruby

  • 11 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow...gr8 description words....it was so excellent....lovd this poem 5/5
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 11 years ago

    by Ramy medhat

    Wow wow wow .. i just can't say anything about this one..i loOoOove it..

  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah Drew

    Phenomenal work. It has such great imagery and flow through out the poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by moretocome

    Crazy... absolutely bananas. Good write.

  • 11 years ago

    by StMario

    This one was really interesting.... made me think..........

  • 11 years ago

    by CynicallyObsessive

    I love your poem.
    it's awesome and clear.
    by the way, thanks for commenting and please rate and comment my other poems.

    loads of love, PAPERDOLL

  • 11 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Really i've no words to express that all of ur poems more than wonderful,u show so beautiful meanings in a symbolic way,&i adore this a lot,u mixed the ideas&the feelings in a special way..u r distinguished..keep shinnin

  • 11 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    I hope it is ok, but i used this poem in an anthology i did.

  • 11 years ago

    by Gilligan

    That was brilliant, I'm really goin to have to practice to get that good I'll probably be dead before I get that good, lol. Anyway...words cannot explain the greatness of that poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Awww, sweet. thanku peoples!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Yeah, thats' fine Ruby. i'm honoured : )