This is such a truely beautiful poem, I have no words. The images were so clear as I read it, and the colours so vivid. Amazing.
P.S. I love your quotes as well, just been reading them and they are all 5/5 from me.
that was the best poem ive EVER read
I dont even have words to explain it
I wish i could write poetry like you can
sorry i cant give you better comments but
that was the BEST
DONT ever stop writing suzie
EVER EVER EVER!!!!
Thank you for sharing this poem with me its helped (you dont know it yet)
An incredible write. The descriptions were brilliant, I can picture all of it, I can almost see it playing like a film before me. Perfection... those descriptions displayed a perfect world.. but the twist in the end.. it's a sad tale. Perfection has its own flaws isn't it? Good job. =)
Really i've no words to express that all of ur poems more than wonderful,u show so beautiful meanings in a symbolic way,&i adore this a lot,u mixed the ideas&the feelings in a special way..u r distinguished..keep shinnin