Comments : I'm Fine I Swear

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristin Null

    I know how you feel! i gave my heart to a guys who i thought really loved me then one day he left me for her! good poem keep it up !

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Aww.... This is so sad. I know what you mean exactly. This guy I am messing with asks me all the time if I am Ok with this. At first I was, now I am so hurt everytime he talks about her and him. He loves her loads. He loves me but nothing compared to her.....It hurts like hell doesnt it?

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by Felicia Tursi

    I love it. There's so much compassion.

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Aww...this is such a sad poem! I love it though! it's great ! as are all of your poems!

  • I loved it..i know how you feel...im dealing with all of it now

  • 18 years ago

    by Trish-Rish

    Aww.. thats a hurtfull poem, but its really good..

    Good Job!

  • 18 years ago

    by livingwith

    I love it, its sweat though pained

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    Oh hunni this is great short but i get where ur comign from nice work xox rc

  • 18 years ago

    by DeepSoul

    Babe, I cried when I read this!!! I've told Dexton that i'm fine so many times, when i'm really not. you spoke my mind! Guys are stupid huh! Well, Luv ya bunches!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sara

    NICE JOB!
    I LOVE YOUR WRITING YOU HAVE GOT TRUE TALENT!!

    ~Sara~

  • 13 years ago

    by Clarise

    This is amazing and all us girls can relate. beautiful work