You Didn't Say Goodbye:'(

by Torn   Nov 24, 2005


You left without a word,
No sign of a goodbye.
Just a lousy text message,
Of which half of it was a lie.

I'm tired of writing poems,
About you and only you.
But you are on my mind,
There's nothing i can do.

I miss you so much,
God do i need you here.
You are my savior,
How i wish you were near.

But we are both angry,
And have locked away our past.
We have tried to face reality,
And saw that we wouldn't last.

Now i have to live without you,
And i don't think that i can.
Tell me how to make it through,
Without me holding your hand?

*dedicated to my ex best friend Kate...we f u c k e d up real bad:(

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  • 17 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    Wow this poem is so gud very emotion gud rhymming!
    5/5!!
    Luv FallenxFromxGrace

  • 18 years ago

    by Rhinehalt

    Another 5 pointer!!! Great poem! I really feel you. I like the way you write. I think though, I still have my two best friends. Even though I came close to losing one.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kendall

    I had a friend exactly like that. i moved away and things apparently got messed up and now we dont speak. but some things just arent meant to be. i hope you can go on without feeling like a part of you is gone.

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Hey! *hugs* I hope you're doing alright. I can tell by your poem (which was well written by the way) that you prolly are feeling a lil lost without your best friend and that's one of the hardest tests for someone's heart. But I can also tell by the way you wrote that you are a strong person, you might not feel like it right now, but grieving is the first step to gaining strength. Keep it up with your writing though, i would like to see some more. :) . lots of luck with everything. -stefhy

  • 18 years ago

    by lynn

    Good poem. I can totaly relate. me and my best friend just went through some shit like this. it took a long time but we finally started to talk. idk if we weren't friends for the same reason you and ur friend wasn't but i know that one day maybe not soon but eventually yall will talk again. keep up the good writing. i hope to read some more good poems. xoxo!!~

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