Omg. write summore! this poem was awesome! 5/5

Amazing poem... you're really talented!!

Wow...thats all that can describe this poem...love it to death...u sound like u r really hurting thoe...but i guess when the love of ur life aint with u...well what else can you do... keep holdin on and i promise that u will be rewarded...another masterpiece...i wish i can write like u...but i can't...well 5/5 mama

Great poem
and thanks for commenting on my poems too
you really know how to put the words 2gether
keep up the good work

Now I have you and you have me
Together we are one
And even though we just met
I feel I loved you all along

This was my favorite part. I love that feeling of feeling like you loved the person even before you met them. It's like you loved them in your dreams. I know what you mean. Excellent poem!

Awe thats so good. i love it!

Great poem.. i really loved it and you so talented!! mwaz stephy Xxx

Awwwwwwww I adore this poem omg, I can so relate to it right now my heart does pound whenever he looks at me wow this is so cute and so true, absolutely amazing, well done my dear aw i love it

Chula wa up? Well im here ma lol n e ways i loves this poem but im givin u a 5/5 especialmente on this part k:
You have something about you
That totally drives me insane
With just a lick of your lips
I feel my whole blood drain...

Dat is so sexy ... i laugh when i read it im like yep that me allright so true... Ima go read more of ya poems k.. o n by da way happy b-lated b day cuz i c ur now 20 WEE-PEE =) ciao...

I loveeeeeeee this poemm.. i love all of your poems.. all of them come from the heart.. and some of them u feel like ur right there.. and you can just imagine everything happeneing.. keep up the good workk.. xo

Sigh... such a great poem... i read this twice or three times??? you connect your words beautifully. be proud of yourself. ;D 5/5