Not Known

by sarah   Nov 27, 2005


Whimpering tears that role down my face
Every thought of you is such disgrace
I am unable to see the light
After all this is done I still fight

I may not be with you nor see you
But when I am I struggle, its new

You rounding your flesh on mine, touching.
You capturing my lost words, talking.
You holding in my thin air, breathing.
You tearing me in two wholes, breaking
You blurring my good vision, seeing
You taking in all my fear, sensing

Only with you I hold no existence
Only with you I bring back remembrance
I am unable to see the dark
When this is done I have one remark

When I'm with you I'm never alone
But when I'm with you I am not known

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Awesome poem:) well done hun! An just to reply to your comment, Im sorry the poem weirded you out, its not ment to it was ment to make aware the reality of Eating disorders, I am in no way "into" that, so yeh im sorry and best of luck to u

    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by sarayu

    I dint really get the meaning,could you plz make it clr to me?you have got a good style though !

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    Good poem, it shows a lot of feeling and that's what makes it good!!

    ~~sweetie

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