Comments : Beaten but not Beat

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Vanessa, again, great poem! I give you a 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    A very sad and emotional poem. Dark, and cold at time. Very nice. Well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cari

    This is very good. It's very real. Very well done. 5/5 totally

  • 17 years ago

    by Brooke Amity

    Smile my baby girl.
    ..xx