Aw this is cute.

This is sweet hun i hope it works out

That is really good.. i liked the ending!!!!!!
~lotta luv~
~britty~

I luvv the end too, but you have to read my poem, "Personal," b/c it is the same thing, but I wrote it from a perspective to where it can sound like it could've been a bad break up! I loved this!! I'm adding you to my faves, cuz this describes EXACTLY what I feel. I feel like I have been a bit renewed by this. THANKS!! :D It's like you read my mind!

I don't really have words for this poem. But I think it is amazing.
This is a situation, where everyone could relate too.. And something I relate too.
I have been wanting to write a poem like this for ages, but it never seemed to work... so, well done!

Good write, i love the ending, it really shaped the poem. Well done and i hope it reachs the person who needs it most....

Awesome poem

Very well written and fantastic emotion behind it - you've proved that a poem is just feelings put in words and thats what makes it so poetic i think. nicely done =)

Awwwww, i love this poem! it was really good! **5/5**

**Lolli**

This poem has a really great ending, I like this poem. But i don't usually go to this section, The colors of the background remind me of a tree :P

Its wonderfully written....your words flow and everything just came together at the end......A beautiful job....

I am so sorry for all this, u made ma eyes teary cuz i went through the same thing with a really close freind..5/5

Lol... your'e probebly wondering why I'm laughing? Cause I wrote a poem almost EXACTLY like this! but mine didn't go down this well... good job mate. and I really liked how u used words that weren't commen... y'kno... the SAME thing as everyone else... keep it up