Comments : This is how i live!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Larry

    The words deserved a four or better -- but where are your punctuations? You started out really consistent in your stanzas -- and then changed your pattern -- remained consistent and use punctuations

  • 18 years ago

    by hm

    HEY THAT WAS SUCH A COOL POEM I L0OVED IT ALL BUT THIS WAS MY FAVOURITE PART

    Dont care what people think
    They dont live in your skin
    Its your choices
    That let you get happiness from within

    ITS SO TRUE WELL TAKE CARE KEEP SHINING WITH LOVE jOsIe