Hey thats a great poem...u really did great with words.
take care and all the best

Hey that was really good! No wonder you have all 5 points! Excellent job.:) and thanks for your comment, i really appreciated it

I hate to sound like everyone else, but this was a good poem. The idea behind the words is great. 5/5

I can't ever seem to keep along poem going. I like this alot. It's....emotional. Me likes.

And thanks for commenting on mine. :)