Oh So Perfect

by ~*Ley*~   Nov 30, 2005


*this is more of a rant than can be considered a poem, its mainly raw emotions and words, not my best work.*

What makes you so special
You whose eyes are so blue
Whose hair is so blonde
And oh so perfect

What makes you so special
You whose personality is flawless
And is wild, warm and loving
And just oh so perfect

What makes you so special
You who hide your tears
Whose makeup covers all
And makes you oh so perfect

What makes you so special
You who is famous for a smile
Whose death is remembered by all
How you were oh so perfect

What made you so special
That you had to work for nothing
But were given everything
Everything oh so perfect

What made you so special
That you were born beautiful
That you had what was needed
To stay oh so perfect

What made you more special
Than those of us who
Dug through the dirt that is us
That will never be perfect

What made you more special
Than those who have flaws
Who push ourselves everyday
To pretend to be oh so perfect

What makes you so special
That you arn't forced to answer us
When everything we do is forced
To be done oh so perfect

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow, that sent a very strong and true message. I agree with you? What makes them so perfect? I loved the part when you said *what made you so special that you had to work for nothing but were given everything everything oh so perfect*. That is really true. I truly loved this poem and even though as you said this is not your greatest work it still sent a message and made me want to read more of your poems. 5/5

    TAKE CARE-
    stargazer38

  • 18 years ago

    by steve

    Welcome back, you still write beautifully...of course I havent forgot you, how could I???

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